Good job! There's something about the eyes that just ... sucks me in. Might be they look more realistic than the rest. I like the highlights on the bolts by his neck. And I like the colours.And the moustache. You can't go wrong with a moustache.
I dunno, I'd say this http://images.uulyrics.com/cover/h/hall-oates/album-the-essential-daryl-hall-john-oates.jpg is going wrong with a moustache.Thank :)
I was going to say that maybe he's the exception that proves the rule, then, but it wasn't so. His moustache is fab